{"id":582,"date":"2011-05-17T20:12:15","date_gmt":"2011-05-17T20:12:15","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/travisheermann.com\/blog\/?p=582"},"modified":"2011-05-23T02:39:04","modified_gmt":"2011-05-23T02:39:04","slug":"hook-em-with-first-lines","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/travisheermann.com\/blog\/2011\/05\/17\/hook-em-with-first-lines\/","title":{"rendered":"Hook &#8216;Em With First Lines"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>I picked up (semi-) random assortment of novels from my TO BE READ pile today in a little exercise of curiosity.<\/p>\n<p>A truism for writing fiction nowadays is that the writer <em>must<\/em> grab the reader\u2019s attention from the beginning.\u00a0 If the reader (or acquisitions editor) isn\u2019t hooked by the end of the first page, she\u2019s likely to put the book down.<\/p>\n<p>So what I\u2019ve compiled a few first lines that handful of my novels to be read.\u00a0 These range from new authors to old hands and heavy-hitters. So tell me which of these you find the most compelling and why. A list of their books and authors is below.\u00a0 Can you match them up?<\/p>\n<p>Answers will come in a later post. Feel free to leave your comments!<\/p>\n<ol>\n<li>\u201cNo! I don\u2019t want the mangosteen.\u201d Anderson Lake leans forward, pointing.<\/li>\n<li>The first thing I can remember in this life is my father driving his white ox, Endurance, to the sky burial platforms.<\/li>\n<li>Veldt to scrub fields to farms to these first tumbling houses that rise from the earth.<\/li>\n<li>Call me Dodd.<\/li>\n<li> I\u2019d been waiting for the vampire for years when he walked in the bar.<\/li>\n<li> The great revelations of my adult life began with the shouts of a lost soul in my neighborhood breakfast joint.<\/li>\n<li> Manfred\u2019s on the road again, making strangers rich.<\/li>\n<li> Dammit, he was nearly out of gas.<\/li>\n<li> \u201cHere they come!\u201d<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<p><strong>Novels and Authors<\/strong><\/p>\n<p><em>It Came from Del Rio<\/em> \u2013 Steven Graham Jones<br \/>\n<em>Perdido Street Station<\/em> \u2013 China Mieville<br \/>\n<em>Green<\/em> \u2013 Jay Lake<br \/>\n<em>Night of Demons<\/em> \u2013 Tony Richards<br \/>\n<em>A Dark Matter<\/em> \u2013 Peter Straub<br \/>\n<em>Dead in Dixie<\/em> \u2013 Charlaine Harris<br \/>\n<em>Fires of Freedom<\/em> \u2013 Jerry Pournelle<br \/>\n<em>The Windup Girl<\/em> \u2013 Paolo Bacigalupi<br \/>\n<em>Accelerando<\/em> \u2013 Charles Stross<\/p>\n\n<!-- Facebook Like Button v1.9.6 BEGIN [http:\/\/blog.bottomlessinc.com] -->\n<iframe src=\"http:\/\/www.facebook.com\/plugins\/like.php?href=https%3A%2F%2Ftravisheermann.com%2Fblog%2F2011%2F05%2F17%2Fhook-em-with-first-lines%2F&amp;layout=standard&amp;show_faces=true&amp;width=450&amp;action=like&amp;colorscheme=light\" scrolling=\"no\" frameborder=\"0\" allowTransparency=\"true\" style=\"border:none; overflow:hidden; width:450px; height: 30px; align: left; margin: 2px 0px 2px 0px\"><\/iframe>\n<!-- Facebook Like Button END -->\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>I picked up (semi-) random assortment of novels from my TO BE READ pile today in a little exercise of curiosity. A truism for writing fiction nowadays is that the writer must grab the reader\u2019s attention from the beginning.\u00a0 If the reader (or acquisitions editor) isn\u2019t hooked by the end of the first page, she\u2019s likely to put the book down. So what I\u2019ve compiled a few first lines that handful of my novels to be read.\u00a0 These range from new authors to old hands and heavy-hitters. So tell me which of these you find the most compelling and why.<span class=\"more-button\"><a href=\"https:\/\/travisheermann.com\/blog\/2011\/05\/17\/hook-em-with-first-lines\/\" class=\"more-link\">Continue reading<span class=\"screen-reader-text\">Hook &#8216;Em With First Lines<\/span><\/a><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":14,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[9,7],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-582","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-general","category-writing"],"publishpress_future_action":{"enabled":false,"date":"2026-06-11 21:35:43","action":"change-status","newStatus":"draft","terms":[],"taxonomy":"category","extraData":[]},"publishpress_future_workflow_manual_trigger":{"enabledWorkflows":[]},"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/travisheermann.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/582","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/travisheermann.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/travisheermann.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/travisheermann.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/14"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/travisheermann.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=582"}],"version-history":[{"count":2,"href":"https:\/\/travisheermann.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/582\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":593,"href":"https:\/\/travisheermann.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/582\/revisions\/593"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/travisheermann.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=582"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/travisheermann.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=582"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/travisheermann.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=582"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}